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Speech Analysis by The One Minute Presenter on Simon Sinek TED speech: Start with Why

Simon Sinek: How great leaders inspire action

Simon Sinek started his working life in advertising and now helps people find their inspiration in life – their purpose – so that they can create platforms to inspire and attract like-minded people. In his own words, “I try to find, celebrate and teach leaders how to build platforms that will inspire others. “

I was referred to Simon’s talk by Paul Dunn of Buy One Give One. Many thanks to Paul. As Paul observes “what Simon really does is to give ‘labels’ to things we know to be true and therefore it resonates even more.

You can watch the video of Simon’s speech at TED.com here.

Here is my breakdown of the speech. The things that are great about the speech are:

  • Excellent demonstration of vocal quality and variety

  • Simple visual is the foundation of the presentation’s content

  • Frequent use of taglines that are repeated through the presentation

  • Calm when adjusting to a technical failure

  • Gestures that add impact to certain words and messages

  • Connecting questions are a relaxed way to engage the audience’s attention

  • Use a big idea to frame his whole presentation’s message

  • Use of examples to make the point clearer

The areas that could be improved include:

  • Anecdotes not that convincing

  • Poor visual on second chart; diffusion of innovation

The things that are great about the speech are:

Excellent demonstration of vocal quality and variety

Simon has a great voice and this is his main speaking asset. Some examples of good usage:

0405-0430 When introducing the Apple example of the Golden Circle.

1300-1315 Explaining his key tagline “people don’t buy what you do, they buy why you do it”

1350-1450 – Explaining why tivo is a commercial failure.

Simple visual is the foundation of the presentation’s content

Simon’s three concentric circles make up his Golden Circle. It’s a simple visual to explain the Why-How-What formula behind his idea. Easy to remember, demonstrate and pass on. Contrast this with his second chart [see improvement below].

Frequent use of taglines that are repeated through the presentation

0430 Simon uses a tagline – a phrase that captures one of his key messages. And he uses it at least six times through his 18 minute presentation. “people don’t buy what you do, they buy why you do it”. The first time he introduces this tagline, he repeats it to highlight its importance. This same tagline was used at 0535, 1055, 1308, 1330, 1510 usually before or after an anecdote

Calm when adjusting to a technical failure

0515 The microphone was giving off white noise. Simon demonstrated a textbook perfect way of how to handle a technical malfunction. He paused to take the new microphone from the tech guy. And then kept going without skipping a beat. Perfect.

Gestures that add impact to certain words and messages

Although Simon is not a high energy speaker in terms of leaping around the stage, he does employ a range of gestures that add energy to his presentation. Some examples:

0550 “here’s the best part

1625 “zero” [this would have been more effective if he was not holding a pen]

1645 “made by a higher authority”

Connecting questions are a relaxed way to engage the audience’s attention

Simon uses questions throughout his presentation. For example his opening question: How do you explain when others are able to achieve something that defy all the assumptions?” These connecting questions prompt the audience to engage with the topic. When someone asks a question, the natural response is to think of a possible answer. Simon continues to using a questioning-style in the opening through “why” questions: For example, Why is Apple so innovative?”

Use a big idea to frame his whole presentation’s message

Sets up his big idea by arousing curiosity. Simon mentions his own personal discovery and how it changed his way of operating and he then made it into a big idea by saying that there was a pattern [from which we could learn]. The big idea:

0150 “They all think, act and communicate in exactly the same way and it’s the complete opposite to everyone else.”

Use of examples to make the point clearer

Let me give you an example…”

0330 If Apple were like everyone else…

0410 How Apple challenge the status quo

Other good points:

Humble delivery style shown when he says,

0155 “all I did was codify it and it’s ..the world’s simplest idea”

Humour was used sparingly but unveiled some thoughtful insights

Simon used humour in a couple of places.

1130 illustration of a laggard; “the only reason they buy touch tone phone is because you can’t buy rotary phones”

1705 “I have a dream versus I have a plan”

Close

1720 “There are leaders and there are those who lead”

Leaders have power. Those who lead inspire us.

Areas that could have been improved:

Anecdotes not that convincing

Simon used the rule of three to arrange his anecdotes. Although Apple was a good choice, I would have hoped for more contemporary examples than Martin Luther King and the Wright Brothers.

Warwick’s coaching tip:

Choosing good anecdotes is a balance of selecting examples the audience can relate to and finding fresh insights and stories the audience have not heard many times before.

Poor visual on second chart; diffusion of innovation

While the Golden Circle was very clear and easy to read, this chart – if you weren’t familiar with was not clear. The numbers were not clearly written.

Warwick’s coaching tip:

Consider pre-drawing visuals to save time with your back to the audience and also to guarantee clearer drawing. Sometimes you may wish to build up a visual – as with Simon’s Golden Circle – when you don’t wish the audience to jump ahead or get overloaded.

Conclusion

This a steady paced, easy to understand presentation with a simple powerful visual that has many different applications. With stellar vocal variety and a clear message, this is a very good presentation whose main point can be easily passed along. I would rate this a 8 out of 10.

About the Author

Warwick J Fahy

Warwick helps C-level executives, working in multinational companies based in Greater China, who struggle to get their point across and influence their key stakeholders. Warwick helps the executive project their message with confidence allowing them to express their opinions powerfully and gain respect from senior managers even when under pressure.Learn more about who Warwick helps here.

Warwick is the author of “The One Minute Presenter: 8 steps to successful business presentations in a short attention span world”.

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10 Warning Signs Your Leaders Lack Executive Presence

Future business success depends on having leaders who can drive change. If you observe any of these signs, your top team is probably under-performing and it’s time to take action.
Executive presence is the hallmark of every successful leader. The ability to think, act and communicate like a leader is grounded in polished communication skills. Executives with presence deliver higher performance. They are vital to the leadership team. People want to work with them. Through enrolling and engaging the best resources, they deliver superior results time and again. Consider successful executives such as John Chambers, CEO of CISCO since 1995. Chambers overcame childhood dyslexia and today his enthusiastic communication style, which conveys can-do optimism, has helped lead CISCO to the top of a tough, fast-changing industry and Chambers was selected in Harvard Business Review’s Top 5 most valuable CEOs in January 2010.
Executives without presence fall short as leaders. Their low-energy performances display a lack of confidence and cause audiences to tune out within minutes. They can’t think on their feet or compose clear, compelling and motivating messages. Their communication style frustrates senior managers, so their ideas are ignored and resisted. Without executive presence their credibility suffers. They are less effective in their role as they struggle to get buy-in from important stakeholders. They must work harder to make change happen. Doubt, frustration and insecurity creep in.
Look for these 10 warning signs. When leaders lack executive presence, they:

1. Are nervous and shaky in front of senior managers

People judge you when you speak. They make assumptions about your capabilities based on how effectively you express yourself.
While this may not seem fair, it’s a fact of life – even more so at the executive level. Executives who seem nervous are labeled less effective. How many times have you seen someone with superior communication skills promoted ahead of a peer who has better technical knowledge? Giving halting and uncertain answers to senior managers impacts credibility, while confident executives who rise to the occasion of a high-pressure meeting are marked as future leaders.
A recently-promoted general manager of a technology firm found it difficult to hold his own with overseas managers in management review meetings. The managers started to question his promotion. By arming him with several quick-thinking tools, we enabled the executive to become better prepared, thus increasing his confidence.

2. Speak without a clear message

Executives from technical disciplines, such as finance or engineering, often have a misconception that technical ability is more important than communicating effectively. The very skills that make technical experts successful actually prevent them from being promoted to senior management. They focus too heavily on process and small details when the situation requires something more concise. Unlike junior managers, a senior executive’s main role is to communicate a clear and compelling message.
Executives with presence understand how to tell the story behind the numbers, correctly balancing big-picture with small details. The best executives, such as Steve Jobs, communicate effectively using simple and concise language that conveys powerful and memorable messages. Jobs has honed this skill over the years and his product launches contain such gems as, “Today, Apple reinvents the phone” from the 2007 iPhone launch. This ability to express a situation in its simplest terms is often overlooked by technical executives. However, all effective executive communicators have mastered this art.

3. Put audiences to sleep

Voice makes or breaks a presentation. A monotone voice puts people to sleep and a whispering voice is a liability when attempting to persuade senior managers. Great presenters have honed their vocal variety. They are able to attract an audience’s attention and keep it with a full range that combines pace, tone, resonance, rhythm, emphasis and pause to add impact to their messages.
Many senior executives are introverted and reluctant to speak out, like a recent banking client who had a limited vocal range. After working through a range of exercises, her vocal range expanded and she began to make a better impression on conference calls and in presentations.

4. Dump data rather than connecting

Facts are interesting, but they don’t motivate anyone to change. But many executives still think data wins the day. Despite almost one hundred years of research into what motivates people, many executives still blast their audiences with data-heavy presentations. Then they are surprised by the lack of engagement and change that results. Executives with presence are able to connect and engage people on multiple levels by understanding why people are motivated to act.
A CEO of a fast-growing retailer was missing opportunities to get buy-in on strategy from his more than 500 senior managers at quarterly meetings. Using a three-step process, we helped him identify the underlying message beneath all those facts and figures and he delivered a memorable talk that stuck with the management team long after his speech. This was a great improvement from his previous approach of reading statistics from index cards.

5. Think presenting is PowerPoint

Many executives waste time making weighty slide-decks instead of the one preparation tool that’s truly effective: rehearsal.
Executives who rehearse by making and reading slides at their computer deliver dull, mundane and forgettable presentations. The best executives combine whole-brain thinking in their presentations with story-line, flow and anecdotes along with appropriate facts, figures and slides.
A general manager with a strong technical background realized he needed to break bad habits built up over decades. He stopped using slides for three months– a major leap of faith. Then he focused on his message and got comfortable speaking with just a few well designed slides that were visual and memorable. The change was dramatic and he became a role-model for other managers.

6. Appear evasive and uncertain when asked questions

Some executives tend to ramble around a topic before expressing their opinion. This propensity gets worse when faced with a very direct, aggressive questioning style designed to intimidate the executives, who are often answering in their second language. Executives who cannot handle this pressure suffer from stress, anxiety and a breakdown in confidence. Executives with presence are able to handle difficult questions and deliver sharp, concise and punchy answers to even the toughest questions.
A finance director at a leading specialty chemicals firm, despite being an expert in his function and industry, was overwhelmed when global executives fired questions at him. Using media techniques, we helped him stay calm and composed while in the spotlight.

7. Choke during important presentations

Executives are expected to step up and perform during important meetings. Unfortunately, many executives let stage-fright drag them down. They forget their message, hesitate and stutter through their presentation, and freeze while answering questions. In the eyes of their senior-level audience, they come across as unprepared, unconvincing and uncertain.
A CEO recently used one of our rehearsal techniques, which shifted him away from what could go wrong and allowed him to focus on his key purpose. This enabled him to better cope in high-pressure meetings and stay on track.

8. Blame culture and language too often

Even successful executives make excuses. Common excuses among China-based multinational executives are that cultural differences and language ability cause ineffective communication. Without doubt, culture plays an important role in communication. However, it is often overused as the cause for misunderstandings among senior managers. Executives with presence are able to weigh the cultural aspects before a presentation and allow for them without diluting their message or tone.
As China-based specialists, we frequently support executives, such as country managers, in getting out of this rut. Many of them humbly believe that their language ability or lack of overseas study is the main reason why they cannot get their message across to senior managers, but often have similar issues in their native language. We then focus on the underlying communication skill that can help the executive become more vocal and proactive.

9. Are unaware of their communication impact

When executives are unaware of their communication style, they are deaf to the world. They come across as rigid because they stick to one style for all settings. This causes friction among the leadership team and delays important decision-making. Executives need to be versatile to the subtleties of each occasion.
A CEO for a manufacturing multinational used to turn his back to the audience during important presentations while he read his slides. This lowered the executive’s credibility among senior managers. Intense feedback and video work helped the CEO become more aware and adopt more effective speaking postures.

10. Are low-key to the point of invisibility

Senior executives can underestimate the power of meetings to enhance their credentials. Executives’ days are full of meetings; regular weekly calls with line managers, monthly conference calls with senior management, and quarterly business reviews. These are often missed opportunities to showcase their potential as a high-performing executive with the capabilities to drive the business forward. Successful executives take every chance to enhance their reputation in the eyes of their peers and superiors.
A senior partner in a professional services firm needed to increase his visibility in important meetings with the global management team. His qualities were not coming across clearly during these meetings and, although a capable executive, he was unable to project his opinions with confidence. We helped him adopt a more assertive role which improved his reputation. His ideas got more air time and his recommendations were more quickly accepted.

If you have read these warning signs and thought “that sounds like an executive on my team”, then it is time to contact us. We specialize in supporting senior executives in overcoming these and many other challenges as they learn to speak with executive presence. Give us a call so we can help you find the best way forward.
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About Warwick John Fahy

I support senior executives working for multinationals in Greater China who lack the executive presence to effectively influence key stakeholders. While these executives are very smart, very knowledgeable and highly capable, a key piece missing. Their executive communication skills need polishing.

I help executives build a strong foundation in executive communication so that they are able to better think, speak and act like a leader to set and implement strategy.

Our Speak with Executive Presence Program which systematically helps executives think, speak and act like a leader, can be found here.
To see if this program is for you, call Warwick to book a complimentary Executive Presence Strategy Session on +86 21 6101 0486. The purpose of this session is to help you gain more clarity on where you want to go and challenges you are having getting there. We’ll also discuss the services I have to offer and determine if what I do can help you get you where you want to go.

Executive presence is the hallmark of every successful leader.

Executive presence is the hallmark of every successful leader. The ability to think, speak and act like a leader is grounded in polished communication skills. Executives with presence deliver higher performance. They are vital to the leadership team. People want to work with them. Through enrolling and engaging the best resources, they deliver superior results time and again. Consider successful executives such as John Chambers, CEO of CISCO since 1995. Chambers overcame childhood dyslexia and today his enthusiastic communication style, which conveys can-do optimism, has helped lead CISCO to the top of a tough, fast-changing industry and Chambers was selected in Harvard Business Review’s Top 5 most valuable CEOs in January 2010.

We could list a few more top executives, such as Steve Jobs, who everyone would agree have presence.

So, my question is, who are the business executives with executive presence working in Greater China today? As I am researching this now for my next book, I would be especially interested to hear your opinion. Please keep it limited to business executives [no politicans or religious figures] and feel free to suggest both Chinese and international executives.

Please email me your suggestions. If you have a link to a video of them speaking, that would be even better. It will be great to highlight them in my book.

Find out whether your executive team is performing to the best of their potential with Warwick’s article “10 Warning Signs Your Leaders Lack Executive Presence”. Email me and I’ll send you a PDF version or download here.